Comments for Aop:220
Nathalie Delrue
On August 19, 2021 12:23
The AOP was submitted to the WNT and WPHA for endorsement on 10 May 2021. During this phase, Germany submitted comments which were addressed by the AOP authors to the satisfaction of Germany, who confirmed the endorsement of the AOP on 22 July 2021.
The attached document includes the comments sent by Germany to the authors of AOP 220 and, in red, the responses from the authors.
edited - August 19, 2021 18:24
Carole Yauk
On December 07, 2018 14:47
We are providing a detailed response to all of the internal reviewers' comments within this attached table. We carefully considered each point individually and have revised the wiki entry accordingly.
edited - December 07, 2018 14:48
Nathalie Delrue
On December 11, 2019 06:59
The primary reviewer of the internal review did a final check of the responses and revisions of AOP 220 by the authors. The conclusion was in favor of moving to the external review. Review's comments: I reviewed the responses and revisions. In my opinion, the authors have adequately addressed all the comments and their AOP is ready to proceed to external review. There is a fair bit of potential overlap with another AOP being developed in the AOP-Wiki. The authors were encouraged to “share” KEs and KERs where possible. They argued, I think reasonably, that their pages were more developed in terms of content, so it is the other developers that should use their pages. Overall, I think this is a nicely developed AOP that is ready for technical review.